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제목 Productivity 등록일 2021-09-22
내용 Productivity is the power to get things done.
My ‘things’ are normally a long process completed by writing, so, for me, productivity means the power to write in time before new things come up and take away my mindfulness.
To my regret, my education lacked discipline of English writing.
Recently, I started self-teaching English writing by reading related books and by keeping journaling in English.
I also watch English news and lectures on Youtube, because I find I need to improve overall English proficiency of mine for good English writing.
담당강사 Odeth2 등록일 2021-09-24
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Productivity is the power to get things done in a timely and cost-effective way. My job involves long processes of writing. So, for me, productivity means the power to write efficiently before new projects come up and and distract me. Regretfully,I have lacked discipline in English writing. Recently, I started self-taught English writing by reading books related to English and by keeping an English journal. I also watch English news and lectures on Youtube, because I find I need to improve my overall English proficiency. 

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