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제목 Letter for asking the opportunity of oversea training 등록일 2022-08-11
내용 It is my great pleasure to have a chance to write to you.

I have come to know of you through your excellent and interesting published articles and pioneering research.

When you came to Korea for the Adynovate launch symposium in 2018, I met you and heard your impressive lecture there.

At that time, my small paper was published on the Pediatric Blood & Cancer, and you were the associate editor at the time, so we briefly talked about it.

Since then, I have been eager to participate in your laboratory during overseas training opportunities.
담당강사 Emma2 등록일 2022-08-11
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It is my great pleasure to have a chance to write to you.

I have come to know of you through your excellent and interesting published articles and pioneering research.

When you came to Korea for the Adynovate launch symposium in 2018, I met you and heard your impressive lecture there.

At that time, my small paper was published on the Pediatric Blood & Cancer, and you were the associate editor at the time, so we briefly talked about it.

Since then, I have been eager to participate in your laboratory during overseas training opportunities.

 

NO MISTAKE:

It is my great pleasure to have a chance to write to you.I have come to know of you through your excellent and interesting published articles and pioneering research.When you came to Korea for the Adynovate launch symposium in 2018, I met you and heard your impressive lecture there. At that time, my small paper was published on the Pediatric Blood & Cancer, and you were the associate editor at the time, so we briefly talked about it.Since then, I have been eager to participate in your laboratory during overseas training opportunities.

 

Note: Your statement was correct, there no any mistake.

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