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제목 Letter for asking the opportunity of oversea training 02 등록일 2022-08-12
내용 I am writing to inquire about the possibility of joining your research laboratory as a Visiting Scholar or Research fellow in your department during March 2023 - February 2024.

I majored in Pediatric Hematology-Oncology. I received a master’s degree in 2009 and a doctor's degree in 2014 at The Graduate School, Kyungpook National University, Daegu, Korea.

I have been worked as an assistant professor (from 2015), and then associate professor (from 2021) of Pediatrics and in the medicine faculty of Keimyung University School of Medicine in Daegu, Korea.
담당강사 Emma2 등록일 2022-08-12
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I am writing to inquire about the possibility of joining your research laboratory as a Visiting Scholar or Research fellow in your department during March 2023 - February 2024.

I majored in Pediatric Hematology-Oncology. I received a master’s degree in 2009 and a doctor's degree in 2014 at The Graduate School, Kyungpook National University, Daegu, Korea.

I have been worked as an assistant professor (from 2015), and then associate professor (from 2021) of Pediatrics and in the medicine faculty of Keimyung University School of Medicine in Daegu, Korea.

 

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I am writing to inquire about the possibility of joining your research laboratory as a Visiting Scholar or Research fellow in your department during March 2023 - February 2024. I majored in Pediatric Hematology-Oncology. I received a master’s degree in 2009 and a doctor's degree in 2014 at The Graduate School, Kyungpook National University, Daegu, Korea. I majored in Pediatric Hematology-Oncology. I received a master’s degree in 2009 and a doctor's degree in 2014 at The Graduate School, Kyungpook National University, Daegu, Korea.

 

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