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제목 Marketing Campaign 등록일 2024-03-21
내용 These days, there are a lot of products around us.
Marketing Campain is important to sell products.
Most effective marketing strategy is to analysis of mind.

For example, most of people is attracted to what they often encounter. Sometimes, I'm tempted to buy something when I watch repeated ads on YouTube.

Recently I attended a lecture on marketing. He said, "Marketing is not just selling products. It sells culture." It means that meaning of possession is important as well as the function of the products.

Uploading on SNS is important and meaningful to people.
담당강사 Latoya1 등록일 2024-03-22
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Correction:

These days, there are a lot of products around us.
Marketing campaigns are important to sell products.
The most effective marketing strategy is to analyze the mind.

For example, most people are attracted to what they often encounter. Sometimes, I'm tempted to buy something when I watch repeated ads on YouTube.

Recently, I attended a lecture on marketing. He said, "Marketing is not just selling products. It sells culture." It means that the meaning of possession is important, as is the function of the products.

Uploading on SNS is important and meaningful to people.

 

Teacher's comment:

Good job, Jiyeon!

- Latoya 


 

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