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제목 Regarding the topic this morning (3) 등록일 2024-04-11
내용 2. Euthanasia may be necessary for the survival of a country like South Korea. Korea has nothing such as natural resources, while Korea has an enormous population compared to its small land. We are accustomed to a societal structure where there is little physical or psychological personal space, constantly comparing and competing with each other. Most people experience burnout and cancer multiple times since they must work and study incessantly to sustain life, resulting in many choosing not to have children.
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2. Euthanasia may be necessary for the survival of a country like South Korea. Korea has few natural resources, Korea has an enormous population compared to its small land. We are accustomed to a societal structure where there is little physical or psychological personal space, constantly comparing and competing with each other. Many people experience burnout and cancer multiple times since they must work and study incessantly to sustain life. resulting in many choosing not to have children.

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