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| 제목 | The summer is comming already. | 등록일 | 2024-04-13 |
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| 내용 | These days, the weather was sunny, while it rained sometimes. I love sunny day, so my mood usually pretty good now. The spring is so short, and the weather is warmer and wamer. The cherry blossom bloomed a lot, I have been wanting to show you this scenery. I always take a walk at the park in front of my home every weekends, the landscape was beautiful and I thought of you. Last weekend, it was quite windy so petal of cherry blossom dropped a lot, it looked like petal rain. And it was also like snow. Someday, I will show you cherry blossom in my country through the YouTube! | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2024-04-16 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Oh~~~ how I would love to see those time when the petals of cherry blossoms start to fall on the ground~~ ^^ such an amazing and lovely sight it will surely be~~~ ^^ Make a youtube channel now so I will be able to see those wonderful times~ ^^ Not to mention, a lot of people would also like to see the beauty of cherry blossoms and everything in your beautiful country~~~ ^^ |
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