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제목 Daily diary (2024.04.16) 등록일 2024-04-16
내용 Hi! First time, I told you I want to write English well. You recommended short sentence is good for me.
So, I think daily diary is good for me. But I don't have a time because I made a presentation in company at last friday.
After that day, I have a time to write it.

First page, I want to introduce my routine.
I get up at 7:40 A.M. Before going to work, I buy ice Americano coffee at Composed coffee. I drink it all before lunch, and I buy new coffee ice Americano. After buying it, I have a chinese lesson at company. My colleages have a lesson about 10 people.
I don't have a byte. see you..
담당강사 Gladys 등록일 2024-04-17
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Hi! First time, I told you I want to write English well. You recommended short sentence is good for me.
So, I think daily diary is good for me. But I don't have a time because I made a presentation in company at last friday.
After that day, I have a time to write it.

First page, I want to introduce my routine.
I get up at 7:40 A.M. Before going to work, I buy ice Americano coffee at Composed coffee. I drink it all before lunch, and I buy new coffee ice Americano. After buying it, I have a chinese lesson at company. My colleages have a lesson about 10 people.
I don't have a byte. see you..

 

Hi! The first time we spoke, I mentioned that I want to improve my English writing. You recommended using short sentences, which I think is a good idea for me.

First page, I want to introduce my routine. I usually wake up at 7:40 A.M. Before going to work, I buy an iced Americano at Composed Coffee. I finish it before lunch, and then I buy another one. After getting my coffee, I attend a Chinese lesson at the company with about 10 colleagues. That's all for now. See you later!

 

Hello, Hocheol!

I hope you find this helpful. Keep it up!^^

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