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| 제목 | Our traditional biggest holiday 'Tschusoek' | 등록일 | 2021-09-14 |
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| 내용 | Next week, we have the biggest holiday. It is just like Thanks giving Day of USA. Of course, this holiday makes us happy. But due to the pandemie Covid-19, we can not be just happy. Because there are many people around the world suffering angony and difficulties caused by this bad Guest. Especially, economic problem is in the middle of the difficulties in stores, restaurant and so on.But I should admit one thing that I am unbelievably not sensitive about the death caused the Virus. In this moment, I think the sorrow, pity that the family are feeling now will I hope go away. |
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| 담당강사 | Abby | 등록일 | 2021-09-14 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Next week, we have the biggest holiday. >> No Correction It is just like Thanks giving Day of USA. >>It is just like the Thanks giving Day of USA.
>>No correction.
>>But due to the Covid-19 pandemic, we can not be. Because there are many people around the world suffering angony and difficulties caused by this bad Guest. >>It is because there are many people around the world suffering from agony and difficulties caused by this bad guest. Especially, economic problem is in the middle of the difficulties in stores, restaurant and so on. >>No correction. But I should admit one thing that I am unbelievably not sensitive about the death caused the Virus. >>But I should admit one thing that I am unbelievably not sensitive about the death caused by the virus. In this moment, I think the sorrow, pity that the family are feeling now will I hope go away. >>In this moment, I think the sorrow and pity that the family are feeling now I hope will go away. ________________________________________ Hi Martin, You keep safe always. Coovid-19 cases are increasing now in our country. Teacher Abby |
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