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제목 | My dream | 등록일 | 2021-09-07 |
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내용 | I have a lot on my mind these days. I have to be courageous in preparing for the future. I want to continue my career with my composure.I i will never give up imaging myself working in the united state as a registered nurse. Actually I want to break the large prejudice of age in korea. However I am sure that the experiences will be a good foundation. just I,m thinking a lot. But, I appreciate the energy of recovering in my inner self. I tend to be strong person as a mother. |
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담당강사 | FredT2 | 등록일 | 2021-09-09 |
첨삭 내용 | I have a lot on my mind these days. Wow, that sounds very beautiful. I fixed a few gramatical errors above and I hope you continue working towards your dreams. Your teacher, Fred |