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제목 My dream 등록일 2021-09-07
내용 I have a lot on my mind these days.
I have to be courageous in preparing for the future.
I want to continue my career with my composure.I
i will never give up imaging myself working in the united state as a registered nurse.
Actually I want to break the large prejudice of age in korea.
However I am sure that the experiences will be a good foundation.
just I,m thinking a lot.
But, I appreciate the energy of recovering in my inner self.
I tend to be strong person as a mother.
담당강사 FredT2 등록일 2021-09-09
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I have a lot on my mind these days.
I have to be courageous in preparing for the future.
I want to continue my career with my composure. I
i I will never give up (imagining) imaging myself working in the (United States) united state  as a registered nurse.
Actually I want to break the large prejudice of age in (Korea) korea.
However I am sure that the experiences will be a good foundation.
(I'm just) just I,m thinking a lot.
But, I appreciate the energy of recovering in my inner self.
I tend to be strong person as a mother.

 

Wow, that sounds very beautiful. I fixed a few gramatical errors above and I hope you continue working towards your dreams.

Your teacher,

Fred

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