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제목 The priorities in life 등록일 2021-09-09
내용 There are so many important thing in ther world to live well.
Some say that material thing such as money, luxurious cars, high and expensive apratment is most essentinal things to live.
Others say that non-material thing such as love, friendship and good relationship is most crucail things to live happily.
Who say the truth? Perhaps, both!
Yes, we need to habe material and non-material things to enjoy our lives.
담당강사 Abby 등록일 2021-09-09
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There are so many important thing in ther world to live well.

>>There are so many important things in ther world to live well.
Some say that material thing such as money, luxurious cars, high and expensive apratment is most essentinal things to live.

>>Some say that material things such as money, luxurious cars, high and expensive apratment is most essentinal things to live.
Others say that non-material thing such as love, friendship and good relationship is most crucail things to live happily.

>>Others say that non-material things such as love, friendship and good relationship is most crucail things to live happily.
Who say the truth? Perhaps, both!

>>Who tells the truth? Perhaps, both!
Yes, we need to habe material and non-material things to enjoy our lives.

>>Yes, we need to have both the material and non-material things to enjoy our lives.

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Hi Martin,

Focus on your plural forms. Stay safe!

Twacher Abby

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