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| 제목 | Today | 등록일 | 2024-01-29 |
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| 내용 | Dear Endia, How are you? Couldn't be better. Today I had many meetings with my colleagues. I'll give a presentation to an internal meeting about my customer's needs. My team's Business Developer(BD) replaced this year. Prior to my BD has the insight and many of experience our software and program language, I think my new BD lacks of experience about our software, so he requests me that you will make a proposal and process flow. I felt that this task is not my job. My role is process consultant when BD gave me design architecture or design concepts. |
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| 담당강사 | EndiaA2usa | 등록일 | 2024-01-30 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Dear Endia, Today I had many meetings with my colleagues. Tomorrow I will present to my colleagues in an internal meeting about my customers' needs. My team's Business Developer (BD) was replaced this year. My prior BD had a lot of insight and many years of experience with our software and program language, I think my new BD lacks experience with our software, so he requested that I write a proposal of our company's process flow. I felt that this task was not my job. My role is a process consultant and my BD gave me a design architecture or design concepts task. |
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