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제목 Healthy recipe 등록일 2024-01-26
내용 I like Korean food consisting of rice, soybean soup, cooked vegetables and grilled fish or stewed meat. I usually eat this meal in the cafeteria at the company or when I visit to my sister’s house.
When I am at home I just eat rice and vegetables or some meat.
In winter I often cook rice soup with oysters because oysters are in season in winter. and it's simple that boil the rice with water and then pop oysters into that. and I buy sweet potatoes becase it stored for months
In the topic three meals I would like to try third one. I haven’t used air-fryer. It looks nice for taste buds.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2024-01-28
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I like Korean food consisting of rice, soybean soup, cooked vegetables and grilled fish or stewed meat. I usually eat this meal in the cafeteria at the company or when I visit to my sister’s house.
When I am at home I just eat rice and vegetables or some meat.
In winter I often cook rice soup with oysters because oysters are in season in winter. and it's simple that boil the rice with water and then pop oysters into that. and I buy sweet potatoes becase it stored for months
In the topic three meals I would like to try third one. I haven’t used air-fryer. It looks nice for taste buds.

 

I like Korean food consisting of rice, soybean soup, cooked vegetables, and grilled fish or stewed meat. I usually eat this meal in the cafeteria at the company or when I visit my sister’s house.When I am at home, I just eat rice, vegetables, or some meat.In winter, I often cook rice soup with oysters because oysters are in season. It's simple: boil the rice with water and then pop oysters into it. I buy sweet potatoes because they can be stored for months. On the topic of three meals, I would like to try the third one. I haven’t used an air fryer. It looks like it's going to make food tastier.

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