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| 제목 | I reserved a new phone today! | 등록일 | 2024-01-20 |
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| 내용 | I reserved a new phone and I will get it late this month. I have been using my phone for three years. It's still working well, but the bettary runs out fast and the storage is almost full. As soon as I said "I have only 2GB.", the staff reacted "Are you really using 254GB now?" He couldn't believe that I used 100GB for videos or pictures. I was thinking about changing my phone in the new year, but I hasitated. This is my first time buying a phone by myself. While my parents bought me a phone by now, since I'm earning I bought it on my own. I was pretty tense, but I felt I became a real adult. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2024-01-23 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello~ ^^ Congratulations as you were able to unlock some on your bucket list as an adult.~ ^^ I am so happy that you are now enjoying new discoveries of things you can do.~ ^^ Thank you for sharing!~ ^^ By the way, what's the brand of your new phone?~ ^^ |
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