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제목 New Year's Plan 등록일 2024-01-02
내용 I don't remember from when I didn't make a plan for a New Year. However, I want to write even a small plan for this year. I haven't been doing something or going somewhere alone, I always did something with my friends or colleagues. However, circumstances are changing. Most of my friends get married, and their life is moving on family. Therefore, I realized that i need to get used to do something alone such as going gallery alone. Even thinking about it, i feel awkward. Therefore, one of my plan for this year is doing something by myself and enjoying doing it alone.
담당강사 Charlene1 등록일 2024-01-02
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I don't can't remember from when I didn't make a plan for a New Year. However, I want to write even a small plan for this year. I haven't been doing somethings or going somewhere places alone,  I always diddo something with my friends or colleagues. However, circumstances are changing. Most of my friends get married, and their life is moving onto family. Therefore, I realized that need to get used to do doing somethings alone such as going to a gallery alone. Even thinking about it, I feel awkward. Therefore, one of my plan  plans for this year is doing  to do something by myself and enjoying doing it alone.

 

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I can't remember when I didn't make a plan for New Year. However, I want to write a small plan for this year. I haven't been doing things or going places alone. I always do something with my friends or colleagues. However, circumstances are changing. Most of my friends get married, and their life is moving on to family. Therefore, I realized that I need to get used to doing things alone, such as going to a gallery alone. Even thinking about it, I feel awkward. Therefore, one of my plans for this year is to do something by myself and enjoy doing it alone. 

 

 

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