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제목 Character is easy to change? 등록일 2024-01-04
내용 One of my friends moved to L.A as she got a job there. As long as I understand her, she is not so actively involved in her life, and people's character or tendencies are not easy to change. However, her circumstances make her change. She never drove when she were in Korea, and she started to drive in U.S.A from last year. She have to do everything by herself as there is no one help her in a new place. As she had a good opportunity on job offer in L.A and she decided to move there from Georgia. She also drove alone from Georgia to L.A for 5 nights 6 days which couldn't image her doing so.
담당강사 Charlene1 등록일 2024-01-05
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One of my friends moved to L.A  LA asbecause she got a job there. As long as I've known understand her, she is not so I have not been actively involved in her life, and people's character or tendencies are not easy to change. However, her circumstances makemade her change. She never drove when she were was in Korea, and she started to drive in U.S.A. from   last year. She havehas to do everything by herself, as there is no one to help her in a new place. As she had a good opportunity ona job offer in LA and , she decided to move there from Georgia. She also drove alone from Georgia to LA for 5 nights and 6 days which couldn't image imagine her doing so.

 

One of my friends moved to LA because she got a job there. As long as I've known her, I have not been actively involved in her life, and people's character or tendencies are not easy to change. However, her circumstances made her change. She never drove when she was in Korea, and she started to drive in U.S.A. last year. She has to do everything by herself as there is no one to help her in a new place. As she had a good opportunity on a job offer in LA, she decided to move there from Georgia. She also drove alone from Georgia to LA for 5 nights and 6 days which couldn't imagine her doing.

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