영작교정
수강기간 중 영어로 일기 또는 자유로운 글을 작성해 주세요.
담당 강사가 직접 교정을 해 드립니다.
| 제목 | I was drawn to a girl. | 등록일 | 2024-01-06 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 내용 | I'm hooked on a girl group audition program 'Universe ticekt' these days. I only watched short video on Youtube, but I fell in love with a girl from Philippines. Her name is 'Elisia'. I thought you when I knew where she came from. She is so pretty and tanlented. I loved her voice at first, and I also found she dance very well. Whatever stage she is on, she always shines. I can't know about her a lot, but I can believe she is kind and try to help others like you! When I saw that she encouraged and complimented other friends, I thought "Oh, It's very similar with my English teacher!" | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2024-01-09 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Just finished a video of Elisia's audition. And I must say, "WOW"~~~~ She can dance and sing very well.~ ^^ At first I thought she's not the one singing and I got so surprised that it's her real voice.~ Wow~~~ amazing~ ^^ Above all, I envy her because she can speak Korean language fluently. How I wish I could also understand and speak Korean fluently~~~~ ^^ |
||