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제목 Question 1 등록일 2024-01-09
내용 I have a question. t
what do you think about that I was talking with someone. Who we are say hello every morning. we are on konwing each other
And I said “ Last night, ENVIDIA stock rised a lot by 6%.
So, I selled . I earned 10% return evenif it’s small money”
he said “oh how much was it when you started then? And what do you think it is now?10% is not an awful lot but is’s something.
and I said “ I buyed 2 month ago. I just invested short time. and smaill money”
he said “ Okay. but I’m asking how much you started with tho” we communicated over there.
I didn’t undertstand.
담당강사 Brandiss1 등록일 2024-01-10
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I have a question. 
What do you think? I was talking with someone.

We said hello every morning and we were getting to know each other.

I said, “ Last night, ENVIDIA stock rised by six percent so, I sold my shares. I earned a 10% return although it’s a small amount of money.”

He said “oh how much was it when you started, and what do you think it is now? Ten percent is not a lot but it is something".
I said, “ I bought shares two months ago. I invested for a short time and with a small amount of money.”
He said, “ Okay, but I’m asking how much you started with.” We continued to communicate but I didn't understand. 
 

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