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제목 I made sentences about last class. 등록일 2023-12-23
내용 I definitely heard that she cursed me at the cafeteria.
He is always jealous when his girlfriend hang out with her friends.
She got a bonus as a reward about long servies.
He forgot to buy souvenir for his family.
Is this the right gate of outbound flight to Korea?
I heard there are lots of pickpockets in Europe.
They dreamed of robbing a bank and to be a rich.
Did you really invest this company two grand?
I paid for bill every time so I have a lot of changes.
Check your change whenever you pay.
I forgot cashing my traveler's checks.
Using envelope when you give money to someone is manner.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-12-27
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I definitely heard that she cursed me at the cafeteria.

Better say: I definitely heard that she cursed me in the cafeteria.


He is always jealous when his girlfriend hang out with her friends.

Better say: He is always jealous when his girlfriend hangs out with her friends.


She got a bonus as a reward about long servies.

Better say: She received a bonus as a reward of her long service to the company. 


He forgot to buy souvenir for his family.

Better say: He forgot to buy souvenirs for his family. (*Use plural form of the noun "souvenir".) 


Is this the right gate of outbound flight to Korea?

Better say: Is this the correct outbound flight gate for Korea?


I heard there are lots of pickpockets in Europe.

**Good and correct sentence!~ ^^ 


They dreamed of robbing a bank and to be a rich.

Better say: They dreamed of robbing a bank to be a rich.


Did you really invest this company two grand?

Better say: Did you really invest two grand in this company? 


I paid for bill every time so I have a lot of changes.

Better say: I paid my bills on time every time, therefore I have a lot of changes.


Check your change whenever you pay.

****Good and correct sentence!~ ^^ 


I forgot cashing my traveler's checks.

Better say: I had forgotten to cash my traveler's checks.


Using envelope when you give money to someone is manner.

Better say: It is polite to give someone money in an envelope. 

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