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| 제목 | New Year Goal | 등록일 | 2023-12-27 |
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| 내용 | I registered yesterday for exercising Gym. I start exercising again after about a year. I gained too much weight because I didn't exercise. My new year's goal is to exercise and get a license next year. | ||
| 담당강사 | Heni1 | 등록일 | 2023-12-27 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I registered yesterday for a gym.membership. IHAVE BEEN exercising again after about a year. I gained too much weight because I didn't exercise. My new year's goal is to exercise and get a license next year. |
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