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제목 I'm going to talk about my coworker. 등록일 2023-12-15
내용 I have a coworker that I like the most. And she told me that she will quit in January. I'm so sad, but I cheer her because she has wanted to enter the game company. Both she and I experienced harassment from the same person in this company, so we have fellowship. Also we have thought the same thoughts that it's hard to learn new things and to develop skills in this company. I have thought about it and I'm hesitating to quit. It's very difficult problem for me. Naturally it's the same for everyone.. I'm considering to quit next year but I'm afraid because this is my first company.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-12-22
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Hello, Jini~ 

Working in a pleasant environment is very important. I remember when I had my first job, I also experienced being bullied by my superior. I felt the same way. At first, I got scared of quitting and finding a new job. But you know what? After few months, I filed a resignation. ^^ With your situation now, if you feel you are not safe and being harassed by someone, do not be afraid to venture on a new path. ^^ I strongly believe you can easily find another and better job because you are diligent and efficient at work. ^^ One more thing: Always prioritize your safety at all times. Take care always!~ ^^ Thank you for sharing!~ ^^ I really appreciate it.~ ^^ Feel free to share anything to me.~~~ ^^ Ajaaaaa, Jini!~~~~~ ^^ 

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