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제목 Regarding the topic this morning (4) 등록일 2024-04-11
내용 Consequently, my generation lacks pensions for old age (already depleted), and newborns will have to bear enormous taxes to support the elderly. Korea's unique Confucian culture and pride in homogeneity lead to severe racial discrimination against foreigners, will make growth as an immigration country highly unlikely. Therefore, for Korea's survival, the government may need to encourage euthanasia as a way of hopeful suicide among the elderly.
담당강사 ThomasH1usa 등록일 2024-04-12
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Consequently, my generation lacks pensions for old age as the fund has already been depleted; new generations will have to bear enormous taxes to support the elderly. Korea's unique Confucian culture and pride in homogeneity cause severe racial discrimination against foreigners, therefore growth due to immigration is highly unlikely. Therefore, for Korea's survival, the government may need to encourage euthanasia as a way of voluntary suicide among the elderly.

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