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제목 1st home work 등록일 2023-12-06
내용 greeting
Thank you for attending today.
Let's get the presentation underway.
let me tell you about safety inspection in the factory.
Before this meeting, we visited each factory on such short notice.
We have confirmed that there is a company-wide safety insensitivity in current.
Today, I will start with some safety equipment that has already been field-tested on-site, key understanding points, and a tentative site inspection schedule after training.
i hope to start off on the right foot for customer's safety
담당강사 Shen 등록일 2023-12-12
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Greeting!

Thank you for attending today.
Let's get the presentation underway.
Let me tell you about safety inspections in the factory.
Before this meeting, we visited each factory on such short notice.
We have confirmed that there is a company-wide safety insensitivity in current.
Today, I will start with some safety equipment that has already been field-tested on-site, key understanding points, and a tentative site inspection schedule after training.
I hope to start off on the right foot for the customer's safety.

Or you can say it this way...

Greeting!

I appreciate you coming today.
Now let's start the presentation.
Allow me to explain about industrial safety checks.

We made last-minute visits to every factory before this meeting.
We have verified that there is now a safety insensitivity throughout the entire corporation.
I'll start out today by going over some safety gear that has previously undergone on-site field testing, important concepts to grasp, and a preliminary plan for site inspections following training. I hope to start off on the right foot for the customer's safety.

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