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| 제목 | I'm talking about the documentary and whale. | 등록일 | 2023-12-02 |
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| 내용 | I'm waching the documentary about whale. "Whale and Me" is the name. Several kinds of whale are shown and they show special things that we didn't know. I learned communication between of whales, their lifestyle, and thought of human. Whlie, I also knew how serious the environmental pollution. Whales think it was food and they eat plastic and polar bears live on the grass and hunt whales. The professionals said, "Environmental pollution is too bad. So whales' lifestyle is chainging and it's very serious problem because whale is a big part of nature." They appealed we have to protect the planet. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-12-07 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello!~ Yeah~ I certainly agree with you on that. We should really do everything we possibly can to conserve whales. By doing so, we will likewise protect and conserve our planet Earth.~~ ^^ |
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