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제목 Thanksgiving day 등록일 2023-11-17
내용 The day before Thanksgivig day, we make food we called "Jeon".
Mix with flours and water, add vegetables and cook with oil in a heated frying pan.
Depending on vegetables it can be napa cabbage Jeon, cheive jeon and sweet potato jeon something like that.
Some family hold ancestral rite and then we eat meal with family.
Nowadays we don't do traditional activit, we have family time.

People feel safe and comfortable in clean environment.
So, road, toilet and other facilities to be cleaned
We do a picinic, walking and others there, so if it does not clean we couldn't refresh in the park.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-11-20
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The day before Thanksgivig day, we make food we called "Jeon".
Mix with flours and water, add vegetables and cook with oil in a heated frying pan.
Depending on vegetables it can be napa cabbage Jeon, cheive jeon and sweet potato jeon something like that.
Some family hold ancestral rite and then we eat meal with family.
Nowadays we don't do traditional activit, we have family time.

People feel safe and comfortable in clean environment.
So, road, toilet and other facilities to be cleaned
We do a picinic, walking and others there, so if it does not clean we couldn't refresh in the park.

 

We prepare a dish called "Jeon" the day before Thanksgiving. Mix with flour and water, add vegetables, and cook with oil in a heated frying pan. It can be napa cabbage jeon, cheive jeon, sweet potato jeon, or something similar, depending on the vegetables. After participating in ancestral traditions, some families gather to share meals. We spend family time instead of doing traditional activities these days. People feel safe and comfortable in a clean environment. So, roads, toilets, and other facilities are to be cleaned. We can't relax in the park if it's dirty because we have picnics, walks, and other activities there.

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