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제목 I made sentences with new words. 등록일 2023-11-18
내용 If you live like that constantly, youo will get chronic disease.
It is her chronic gatigue that make her sleepy.
I think you should talk with your parents earnestly.
It's hard losing weight through only exercise.
He has been losing weight since last year.
She agreed as word, but she didn't sign on the document.
Stop using this medicine if you break out a rash.
Food poisoning cause stomacheache.
Apparentely you still hurt, the doctor's diagnosis was fault.
Go to see a doctor and dont worsen your disease.
Everyone having scallop had food poisoning.
If the dish looks undercooked, don't have it.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-11-24
첨삭 내용

If you live like that constantly, youo will get chronic disease.

--> If you live constantly like that, you will get chronic disease. 


It is her chronic gatigue that make her sleepy.

--> Her persistent fatigue causes her to sleep. 


I think you should talk with your parents earnestly.

--> Good and correct sentence~ ^^ 


It's hard losing weight through only exercise.

--> It is difficult to lose weight alone through exercising.


He has been losing weight since last year.

--> Good and correct sentence~ ^^


She agreed as word, but she didn't sign on the document.

--> She agreed verbally, however, she didn't sign on the document. 


Stop using this medicine if you break out a rash.

--> If you develop a rash while taking this medication, discontinue use.


Food poisoning cause stomacheache.

--> Food poisoning can cause stomachache. 


Apparentely you still hurt, the doctor's diagnosis was fault.

--> You must still be in pain, as the doctor's diagnosis was incorrect.


Go to see a doctor and dont worsen your disease.

--> Visit a doctor to avoid worsening your condition.


Everyone having scallop had food poisoning.

--> Everyone who ate scallops got food poisoning. 


If the dish looks undercooked, don't have it.

--> If the food appears to be undercooked, avoid it.

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