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제목 woody's weekend planning 등록일 2023-11-24
내용 Hi ~
i want to tell you my weekend plans
hm.. saturday i will wake up 5 o'clock and then i'm going to driving range
After practicing hard i come back home and then i will take shower, take a rest.
i planning to prepare for the company's project in the afternoon.

sunday morning , i will exercise like yesterday
our family will take career examination consultation in the afternoon
and then i planning to prepare for the company's project at night

i dont't feel good because i only work at work without my spare time
it's a sad weekend
담당강사 Charisse 등록일 2023-11-27
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Hi ~
I want to tell you of my weekend plans.  Hm.. Saturday I will wake up at 5 o'clock and then I'll go to a driving range.
After practicing hard I'll come back home, take a shower and take a rest.  I'm planning to prepare for the company's project in the afternoon.

On Sunday morning , I will exercise again.  Our family will take career examination consultation in the afternoon

and then I plan to prepare for the company's project at night


I dont't feel good because I only work at work without  spare time.
It's a sad weekend.

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