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| 제목 | I saw your reply and I'm talking about powerful woman. | 등록일 | 2023-11-11 |
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| 내용 | I saw your reply about Halloween in your country and introvert. I'm so happy knowing about how to celebrate Halloween in your country. Thank you for sharing with me! I also saw another reply, and I completely agree that "A woman who is ok with being alone is a powerful woman." I am motivated from powerful woman like Wonder Woman, Black Widow, or Captain Marvel. They are so nice and strong. In Korea, partriarchy and musculism are left, so there is still gender conflict. Since I have a critical opinion about it, I've been encouraging career woman as well as powerful woman. In addition, mothers! | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-11-13 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello, Jini!~~~ Oh wow~~~ thank you for appreciating all the moms as strong women.~ ^^ Honestly, all women are powerful in their own ways.~ ^^ Perhaps, continue encouraging other women to pursue their dreams in life. And yes!~ Let's keep shining powerful women~~~~ ^^ Take care always~ ^^ --Lynda ^^
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