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제목 A factor in the college admission 등록일 2023-11-13
내용 I don’t think high grades are the no. 1 factor in the college admission. Because students are tend to concentrate on grade regardless of their talent or hope. It’s not natural. Students needs to have various experience not only grades. Moreover there were social issue such as test questions’ leak by the teacher who has daughters in the same high school. And there was false awards and false paper career. I think SAT is the no 1 factor because that test is thoroughly managed, so it should be fair.

If it needed, changed and omitted is okay for deveolping writing. Thank you.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-11-14
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I don’t think high grades are the no. 1 factor in the college admission. Because students are tend to concentrate on grade regardless of their talent or hope. It’s not natural. Students needs to have various experience not only grades. Moreover there were social issue such as test questions’ leak by the teacher who has daughters in the same high school. And there was false awards and false paper career. I think SAT is the no 1 factor because that test is thoroughly managed, so it should be fair.

If it needed, changed and omitted is okay for deveolping writing. Thank you.

 

I don't believe that getting into college is mostly determined by your GPA. Because students tend to concentrate on their grades regardless of their talent, it’s not natural. Students need to have various experiences, not just grades. Moreover, there are social issues, like the instructor who has daughters at the same high school leaking test questions. False documents and prizes were also found. I think the SAT is a lot fairer because their test is thoroughly managed.

( What is a false paper career? ) 

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