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제목 To preserve our building 등록일 2023-11-15
내용 You mentioned in your message that you want to preserve our school buiding and want to gather idea for that.
First you can create a big sign board outside to awareness to the public
Second , you can write on the SNS to spread the word easily.
Third, you can petition this case to the city hall for getting support of the citizen.
담당강사 Vanessa1 등록일 2023-11-16
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You mentioned in your message that you want to preserve our school buiding and want to gather idea for that.
First you can create a big sign board outside to awareness to the public
Second , you can write on the SNS to spread the word easily.
Third, you can petition this case to the city hall for getting support of the citizen.

 

You mentioned in your message that you want to preserve our school building and want to gather ideas for that. First, you can create a big sign board outside to raise awareness among the public. Second, you can write on the SNS to spread the word easily. Third, you can petition this case to the city hall for the support of the citizens.

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