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제목 I'm talking about outgoing person and introverted person. 등록일 2023-11-04
내용 I'm a intorverted person, and most of my friends are the same. So I prefer acting by myself, but I think it was stronger after covid. Before covid, almost all of restaurants had high-occupancy seats, while after covid, many people eating alone were increased. Thus, people didn't mind eating alone or doing alone. I also did anything by myself more easily. I can alone watching movie, eating food, going concert, and going singing rooms. Nowadays, I usually eat lunch alone, I feel it more comfortable because I can use lunchtime for me absolutely. It is only thing that I thought covid is fine.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-11-08
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Hello, Jini!~ ^^ 

Nado.~ ^^ I am also an introvert like you.~ ^^ Doing things on your own is so fun, right? ^^ I even read a quote saying, "A woman who is ok with being alone is a powerful woman." Do you agree? I absolutely do so.~~~ ^^ Maybe that's one of the reasons why I feel so comfortable whenever we talk. ^^ We are so alike in so many ways.~ kkk~~~ 

 

Oh by the way, kindly check the correction if you have some spare time. Hope this can be of help.~ 

Take care!~ ^^ 

--Lynda^^ 

*Correction: 

I'm an introvert, and most of my friends are as well. So I prefer performing alone, but I believe it became stronger after covid. Prior to covid, practically all restaurants featured high-occupancy seats, but after covid, the number of persons eating alone grew. As a result, people didn't mind eating or doing things alone. I also found it easier to do things on my own. I can entertain myself by watching movies, eating cuisine, attending concerts, and visiting singing rooms. Nowadays, I frequently have lunch alone because it is more convenient for me because I can devote my entire lunch hour to myself. It's the one thing I believed covid was fine with.

 

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