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제목 I want to know how Halloween is celebrated in your contry. 등록일 2023-11-04
내용 If I talk about our country first, actually, I don't know well but many people enjoy the Halloween. I don't celebrate any festival, because I dislike crowed places. And the most improtant reason is that I hate ghosts and zombies. So I had never celebrated Halloween. As you know, people in my country were changed after going through an accident. People were impacted and this year most of them were careful. Some still enjoy Halloween, but I think we need more time. by the way, in fact I had never seen real Halloween festival. I want to know how do people in your country celebrate Halloween.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-11-08
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Hello!~ ^^ 

In the Philippines, not many also celebrate Halloween here. There are just few places where you can commonly see Halloween decorations such as malls, markets, or some other business areas. I think they actually have it for marketing strategy since it appears fun to some people and they can get profit by selling items related with Halloween. In some offices/companies, they have Halloween party where every employee is encouraged to wear Halloween costumes. Usually, the company will have a contest on who will have the best Halloween costume. I also experienced it in the previous company I worked with. ^^ On October 31st, kids can go to malls wearing cute Halloween costumes and they can ask for candies. ^^ Sometimes, some schools also have activities and let kids wear their cute Halloween costumes, such as costumes of Disney Princesses, Super Heroes, etc.~ ^^ 

 

*Correction: 

If I start with our country, I don't know how well I know, but many people enjoy Halloween. I don't participate in any festivals since I dislike crowded areas. The most obvious explanation is that I hate ghosts and zombies. As a result, I had never celebrated Halloween. As you may know, an accident affected the lives of people in my country. People were affected, and most of them were cautious this year. Some people still celebrate Halloween, but I believe we need more time. By the way, I'd never seen a real Halloween festival before. I'm curious how people in your nation celebrate Halloween.

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