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제목	Baguio City	등록일	2023-10-25
내용	I heard the Baguio city yesterday. This city is at an altitude of 1,500 meters above sea level. So, It has really cool weather during year. In Korea, we have same city. It is Tae-baek city. This city is really cool in summer. I visited there in summer because my friend lived. I didn't feel any hot whether in Tae-baek. It was really surprised experience for me. This city famous about mine. Unfortunately, mining industry collapsed several decades ago. Baguio is famous for education system because good whether is good for study. I want to Tae-baek become famous city as Baguio someday.
담당강사	rosey	등록일	2023-10-26
첨삭 내용	I heard the Baguio City yesterday. This city is at an altitude of 1,500 meters above sea level. So, It has really cool weather during the year. In Korea, we have the same city. It is Tae-baek city. This city is really cool in summer. I visited there in summer because my friend lived. I didn't feel any hot weather in Tae-baek. It was a really surprising experience for me. This city is famous for mine. Unfortunately, the mining industry collapsed several decades ago. Baguio is famous for its education system because good weather is good for studying. I want to Tae-baek become a famous city like Baguio someday.