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제목 I went to the event selling cartoons and stickers. 등록일 2023-10-29
내용 As prebiously I said, I went to the event selling cartoons, and stickers. This event's name is 'Sports Day', so people can sell something about sports cartoon or theme. I don't know you know this cartoon, I like 'Slam Dunk'. I like others sports cartoon or animation, but now I'm focusing on it. So I went there to buy book and many stickers about this cartoon. Despite the room is large, I couldn't move well because there were a lot of people like me. But finally I got what I wanted to buy. It was exhausted time, but it was happy at the same time. I'll also come here next year.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-11-01
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Hello!~ ^^ 

Yeah!~ Slam Dunk is very popular here in the Philippines because the most popular sports here is basketball. ^^ Wow!~ I also like such kind of event. I love stickers and cartoons. My kids also love stickers. ^^ They always ask me to buy stickers of their favorite cartoon characters like Hello Kitty, Minnie Mouse, Spiderman, etc..~ kk~ ^^ 

 

*Correction:

As I previously said, I attended the event selling cartoons and stickers. Because the name of this event is 'Sports Day". People can sell items related to sports cartoons or themes. I'm not sure whether you're familiar with the cartoon 'Slam Dunk,' but I enjoy it. I enjoy other sports cartoons or animation, but this is my main emphasis right now. So I went there to buy a book and a bunch of stickers related to this cartoon. Despite the fact that the room was vast, I couldn't move about freely because there were so many others like myself. But I eventually got what I desired. It was a tired moment, but it was also a happy time. I'll be back here next year.

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