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제목 Work out everyday 등록일 2023-10-31
내용 I started to work out in the gym in the our company building.
My blood pressure have risen recently, so I need to make my body more health.
My plan is as below.
In the morning, I run about 30 minutes.
In the lunch, I do weight training about 30 minutes.
I will walk up the stairs to my office on the 15th floor.
Maybe I eat 3 dishes in the company during the week.
I eat just lunch and dinner during the week before now.
I think I have to avoid eating snacks.
Some Youtuber said eating smaller is better than excercise.
담당강사 rosey 등록일 2023-11-01
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I started to work out in the gym in our company building.
My blood pressure has risen recently, so I need to take good care of my health.
My plans are:
In the morning, I run about 30 minutes.
In the lunch, I do weight training for about 30 minutes.
I will walk up the stairs to my office on the 15th floor.
Maybe I eat 3 dishes in the company during the week.
I ate just lunch and dinner during the week previously.
I think I have to avoid eating snacks.
Some YouTubers said eating less is better than exercising.

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