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| 제목 | I'm talking about drink! | 등록일 | 2023-10-21 |
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| 내용 | I saw your reply about my travel. And my answer about "Have you tried the San Miguel beer?" is unfortunately "No, I hadn't". While I don't like drink, I get some interesting in beer after I met less sparkling beer. Sparkling is a big reason that I don't like beer or soda. I tried some beers with less sparkling and fruit taste by chane, I have started to like beer. So I'm trying to have a number of beers. I think that I saw the San Miguel beer previously. I searched it and I found it sell in Korea. I'm so excitied about appearing new beer that I try. I apprecicate your recommend! Thank you! | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-10-26 |
| 첨삭 내용 | *Correction: I saw your response to my travel. And, sadly, my answer to "Have you tried the San Miguel beer?" is "No, I hadn't." While I don't drink, I became interested in beer after meeting less sparkling beer. Sparkling is one of the main reasons I don't enjoy beer or soda. I started liking beer after trying certain beers with less effervescent and fruit flavor by chane. So I'm attempting to consume a number of beers. I believe I've seen the San Miguel beer before. I looked it up and discovered that it is available in Korea. I'm so excited about the appearance of new beer that I sample it. Thank you for your recommendation! Thank you very much!
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