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| 제목 | I'm talking about the American drama that I'm watching nowadays. This is part one! | 등록일 | 2023-10-21 |
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| 내용 | I'm watching "9-1-1 Lone Star" thesedays. It's about firefighter, paramedic, 911 dispatcher and police. I suddenly become curious about the title during I'm writing this, 'Lone Star' mean a star of Texas's natinal flag. Taxas's another name is The Lone Star State. And this drama's background is Austin of Texas. By the way, there are many incidents and accidents and everything was that I couldn't even expected. The accident that I can't forget the most is mercury poisoning. I'll write this accident in next writing. I reached the character limit. It's a perfect break. Haha~ | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-10-26 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello, Jini~ Wow~ I think it is a very interesting drama. ~ ^^ I would love to watch it, too. ^^ Enjoy watching~ ^^ --Lynda^^
Correction: I've been watching "9-1-1 Lone Star" lately. It concerns firefighters, paramedics, 911 dispatchers, and police officers. While composing this, I became interested about the title; 'Lone Star' refers to a star on Texas' national flag. The Lone Star State is another moniker for Taxas. And the setting for this drama is Austin, Texas. By the way, there were numerous events and accidents, all of which were unexpected. The accident that sticks with me the most is mercury poisoning. This incident will be written about in my upcoming piece. I had used up all of my characters. It's the ideal break. Haha~ |
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