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제목 This is part two about American drama. 등록일 2023-10-22
내용 Continuing on, The accident is a delivery man who felt that it seems like company employees disregard him, so he put mercury in sandwiches and delivered them. Every employees that ate this sandwiches all acted weird. Someone tried to kill themselves. They tried to fall out of the window despite the police blocked. That scene was weird and unbelievable. It seems like a zombie. I can't understand the sandwich delivery man's motive. The employees disregard him is just his guess, but I can't believe that it led to crime. I impressed that people tried to die with a poker face. It was chilling.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-10-26
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Oh my goodness, just reading your story gives me goosebumps. It must have been so thrilling to watch.~ ^^ 

 

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Continuing, the accident is a delivery man who believed that corporate colleagues were dismissive of him, so he placed mercury in sandwiches and delivered them. Every employee who ate these sandwiches acted strangely. Someone attempted to commit suicide. Despite the police barricade, they attempted to jump out the window. That was an odd and bizarre scene. It appears to be a zombie. I'm baffled by the sandwich delivery man's motivation. His guess is that the staff disdain him, but I can't think that lead to crime. People tried to die with a poker face, which impressed me. It was terrifying.

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