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제목 I wrote about my trip. And this writing is part one. 등록일 2023-10-14
내용 I went to Singapore as I said. I was tired because I flew at dawn, but I was so excited. The nature was beautiful and it was just like vacation spot. Korea was getting colder, so I liked the weather in Singapore. We went to Kaya toast eatery at first. Kaya toast is one of famous food and literally many people was already in there. Next I went design museum, apple store and Gardens the bay. We saw Super Tree Show in the evening. The lights wind the tree shape towers brightened with exciting songs. It was like seeing lots of stars in the dark.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-10-18
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Wow!~ I am trying to imagine how beautiful it must have been.~ ^^ Thank you so much for sharing, Jini!~~~ ^^ 

 

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As previously said, I traveled to Singapore. I was exhausted from flying at dawn, but I was ecstatic. The scenery was stunning, and it felt like a vacation destination. As the weather in Korea became colder, I preferred the weather in Singapore. First, we headed to Kaya toast eatery. Kaya toast is a popular dish, and there were a lot of people there. I then visited the Design Museum, Apple Store, and Gardens by the Bay. In the evening, we saw Super Tree Show. The lights that wind around the tree-shaped towers are enlivened by lively songs. It was similar to seeing a lot of stars in the dark.

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