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제목 This is part two of Singapore trip. 등록일 2023-10-14
내용 Second day, we ate shrimp noodle for breakfast. Next step, we went to the store to buy gifts. I bought chocolates, cookies, and cosmetics. And we moved to Marina bay sands's observation deck. The elevater was so fast, so we could reach the top floor soon. It was stuffy and hot, but the view was nice. I could see Singapore's landscape. Our last schedule in that day was brewery tour. Singapore is the country that Tiger beer is made. I love Tiger beer, so it was very interesting time for me. Tiger lager that I drunk there was delicious. Onion fried was also great. I want to go there again.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-10-18
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Whoa!~ I didn't know that  the Tiger beer originated in Singapore. It also famous here in the Philippines. Some of my friends like it, too.~ ^^ Oh by the way, we also have a famous beer brand in the Philippines, the San Miguel beer. Have you tried it? ^^ 

 

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We had shrimp noodle for breakfast the next day. The next step was to go shopping for gifts. I went shopping for chocolates, biscuits, and cosmetics. And then we went to the observation deck at Marina Bay Sands. We could go to the top floor quickly because the elevator was so speedy. The atmosphere was stuffy and heated, but the view was beautiful. I could see the landscape of Singapore. Our final activity for the day was a brewery tour. Tiger beer is manufactured in Singapore. I enjoy Tiger beer, therefore this was an exciting occasion for me. The Tiger lager I drank there was fantastic. The fried onions were also delicious. I'd like to return there.

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