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제목 The last part of my trip. 등록일 2023-10-15
내용 Last day, we went to the Universal Studio. It was my first time, in conclusion, it was so awesome. I had an amazing experience I never had. Actually, I planed going to Universal to meet only Bumblebee and Optimus prime. I rode other rides and I finally met them. Optimus prime showed up first, and Bumblebee came out right next. Bumblebee constantly danced with songs, that was so cute and lovely. I took a picture with them, nevertheless I dont' like taking pictures. I took a picture with bumblebee key ring in my hand and Bumblebee noticed that and came to me closer. I was very nervous and happy.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-10-18
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Hahahahaha~~~ Bumblebee seems so cute.~ ^^ I wanna see him too and take pictures with them. ^^ 

 

**Correction: 

We went to the Universal Studios last day. It was my first time, and it was just fantastic. I had an incredible experience that I had never had before. Originally, I intended to visit Universal to meet only Bumblebee and Optimus Prime. I rode various rides and eventually ran into them. Optimus Prime was the first to appear, followed by Bumblebee. Bumblebee was continuously dancing to songs, which was adorable and charming. I took a picture with them, despite the fact that I dislike taking pictures. I shot a photo with a bumblebee key ring in my hand, and Bumblebee noticed and approached me closer. I felt both terrified and excited.

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