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| 제목 | I made sentences with new words in lesson 16 and 17. | 등록일 | 2023-10-15 |
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| 내용 | I want to prepare your bridal shower. This building is classy yet it was built in the past. Don't kidding. This class is sophisticated. I was hectic yesterday because it was a day coincide important problems. I'll stay a bachelorette by thirty. While I asked the RSVP to him, he didn't answer yet. Would you like to come to my housewearming party? Did you write down the science test deadline? I'll invite only secondary school friends. The intimate relationship is the more you have to careful. This party has many kinds of beverages. I'm not hungry that much, so I have some finger food. |
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| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-10-18 |
| 첨삭 내용 | *Correction: I'd like to plan your bridal shower. This building is elegant, yet it was constructed in the past. You're not kidding. This is a sophisticated class. Yesterday was a stressful day for me because it coincided with two major problems. I'll be a bachelorette till I'm thirty. He didn't respond when I asked for the RSVP. Do you want to attend my housewearming party? Did you make a note of the science test deadline? I'll just invite friends from secondary school. The more intimate the relationship, the more cautious you must be. There are numerous types of beverages available at this celebration. I'm not hungry, so I'll eat some finger food. |
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