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제목 This writing's subject is ghost. 등록일 2023-10-02
내용 I think ghost exist in reality. I believe UFO and alien but ghost seems like existence more. Because ghost was captured in the picture sometime. And many people testified watching the ghost. In our country, I'm not sure if it's the same in other countries, there is a saying that a a person who died unfairly become a ghost and around this life. So it is said that we have to solve their resentment. Otherwise the ghost tease people involved in their death. There are many happens caused by unknown, and I think it caused by ghost. I have never seen the ghost but I believe they are nearby me.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-10-06
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I believe ghosts do exist in reality. I believe in UFOs and aliens, but ghosts appear to exist more. Because a ghost was captured in the photograph at some point. Many people testified to seeing the ghost. In our country, and I'm not sure if it's the same in other countries, there's a saying that a person who died wrongly becomes a ghost and lives in this world. So it is argued that we must address their animosity. Otherwise, the ghost taunts those who were engaged in their death. There are many occurrences produced by the unknown, and I believe they are caused by ghosts. I've never seen a ghost, but I feel one is nearby.

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