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| 제목 | This writing topic is the videos which I watch mainly on the Youtube. | 등록일 | 2023-10-03 |
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| 내용 | I usually watch the video about the pet or animal. One of them, I like cat's videos the most. At first, I only watched one channel's video that seven cats appear. While I was watching this channel, I saw another channel's video by the algorithm. That video is about adopting a street cat. The cat has ogrange far and wears on white far socks. The gender is female. Her expression was sharp and guard was too much. But now, passed one year over, she looks like more comfortable and safty. Her face turned to soft too. When she meet stranger she was nervous, but she act charming to her owner. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-10-06 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I frequently watch videos concerning pets or animals. Cat vids are my favorite among them. I initially only viewed one channel's video with seven cats. The algorithm showed me another channel's video while I was watching this one. That video is about how to adopt a street cat. The cat has orange fur and is dressed in white socks. Female is the gender. Her attitude was stern, and she was on high alert. But now that a year has passed, she appears to be more at ease and secure. Her expression softened as well. She was apprehensive when she met a stranger, but she was lovely to her owner. |
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