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제목 interview1 등록일 2024-03-05
내용 1.Why do we accompany children?
I am their mother, and the children are still young. They need a mother's care.
Being with the children also helps with my emotional stability.

2. Why doesn't your husband go with you?
My husband works as a director at a company. He must work in Korea.

3. Why have you decided to go to the United States for your studies?
Korean real estate is most affected by financial situation in the United States.
Studying in the U.S. will be very beneficial for my career
담당강사 Tristan1 등록일 2024-03-05
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1.Why do we accompany children?
I am their mother, and the children are still young. They need a mother's care.
Being with the children also helps with my emotional stability.

2. Why doesn't your husband go with you?
My husband works as a director at a company. He must work in Korea.

3. Why have you decided to go to the United States for your studies?
Korean real estate is most affected by financial situation in the United States.
Studying in the U.S. will be very beneficial for my career

 

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