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| 제목 | I made sentences from last classes this as well. | 등록일 | 2023-09-23 |
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| 내용 | He just browese as if he wasn't interested. Don't afraid. I'll be right behind you. The line is long from the cashier. Her purse is the thinest in our purses. He is one of the most fabulous students in our school. I'm looking for a reasonable dress to wear for dinner next week. If that shirt not match him, give it to me. The fitting room in this store is huge enough to have many people. This window is insecure as if paper. She locked the door and played the game. You have to check email address properly before send an email. My belongings was stolen by a thief for I'm trying on a new shirt. |
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| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-09-28 |
| 첨삭 내용 | CORRECTION: Better say: There is a long line on the cashier.
Better say: Her purse is the thinnest of any of our purses.
Better say: I'm looking for a suitable dress for dinner next week.
Better say: Give it to me if that shirt doesn't fit him.
Better say: This store's fitting room can accommodate a large number of customers.
Better say: This window is as fragile as paper.
Better say: Before sending an email, double-check the email address.
Better say: A robber stole my possessions while I was trying on a new blouse. |
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