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| 제목 | I'm thinking about talking about MBTI. | 등록일 | 2023-09-23 |
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| 내용 | In Korea, MBTI was a trend. I thought it was cool these days, but we use it ordinary day. One of them, If I talk about P and J, it is a important thing when we ready the travel. I'm a P, so I like free and moving improvised. And I'm fine following the J person's plan, nevertheless I was exhausted when I went to Japan with my J frirend. The same day, my another friend went to Vietnam with J friends like me, she said that I have to go travel with only P friends. I agreed that, and I felt valuable having P friends. We didn't to intend this, we reminded valuable of each other. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-09-28 |
| 첨삭 내용 | CORRECTION: MBTI was popular in Korea. I thought it was cool at the time, but we use it every day. One of them, if I speak about P and J, is crucial while we prepare to depart. As a P, I prefer loose and dynamic improvisation. And, while I'm good with following the J person's plan, I was fatigued when I went to Japan with my J friend. My other buddy travelled to Vietnam on the same day as me with J friends, and she told me that I had to travel with only P friends. I agreed, and having P friends made me feel valued. We didn't mean to remind each other of this, but we did. |
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