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| 제목 | I'm talking about my hobby and leisure activity. | 등록일 | 2023-09-23 |
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| 내용 | I used to like watching movie, but I wouldn't go well theater at least. I think the reason is there are no films to watch. I usually tended to watch films twice or thrice a month, however, the last movie which I watched is the Spider-man animation In January. I'm looking forward opening some nice movie. So these days I tend to go walking outside. In the summer, when the sun is most hottest, I went to go out to walk for an hour. It was exahaused easily, and I felt great at the end. And I also feel fresh when I shower. For these reasons, I went walking every sunday. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-09-28 |
| 첨삭 내용 | CORRECTION: I used to enjoy watching movies, but I would never go to a movie theater. I believe the reason is that there are no movies to watch. I used to see movies two or three times a month, but the last one I saw was the Spider-Man animation in January. I'm looking forward to watching a good movie. So I go for walks outside these days. In the summer, when the heat is at its hottest, I went for an hour-long walk. It was readily exhausted, and I felt terrific at the conclusion. I also feel revitalized after a shower. Every Sunday, I went for a stroll for these reasons. |
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