I read an article about earthquake in Morocco. They said the huge strong 6.8 earthquake that struck Morocco on Sept. 8 has killed more than 2,862 people and the government expected there will be more death roll from the press.
It's pretty a tremendous disaster for residents. It could be seen to people in Morocco a bitter fate.
Bitter fate can be seen on people's face in Morroco. It was tearing me apart to see them. I am going to find out the ways to help them as far as I can.

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I read an article about earthquake in Morocco. They said the strong 6.8 earthquake that struck Morocco on Sept. 8 has killed more than 2,862 people and the government expected there will be more death roll from the press. It's pretty a tremendous disaster for residents. Bitter fate can be seen on people's face in Morroco. It was tearing me apart to see them. I am going to find out the ways to help them as far as I can.

Hi Tony,

Thank you for another update and practicing your skills through this composition. As I've seen, few lapses were just changed and corrected. In general, as I was reading it, it's been just simple yet adequately constructed. Keep going, I'm rooting for your progress!

Teacher Neiz