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제목 This time I tried to write about my favorite season. 등록일 2023-09-17
내용 My favorite season is fall. The fall is cool season because it's after the summer and befor the winter. The summer is too hot and the winter is freezing cold in Korea. So I love the fall that blend two seosons. And also It's good to walk and doing lots of activities. We call fall as 'the season of camping'. I didn't go camping ever, but I really hope to go camping or glamping. The other reason the people in Korea are waiting the fall, we can wear pretty clothes. In summer or winter is too hot and cold, we have no choice wearing clothes, so we wear clothes that we want in short term.
담당강사 Lynda 등록일 2023-09-19
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Fall is my favorite season. The fall is a pleasant season because it follows the summer and before the winter. In Korea, the summers are unbearably hot, and the winters are bitterly frigid. So I adore the fall that combines two seasons. It is also beneficial to walk and engage in a variety of activities. We refer to autumn as "camping season." I've never gone camping, but I really want to go camping or glamping. Another reason Koreans are looking forward to fall is the opportunity to wear nice clothes. When it is too hot or cold in the summer or winter, we have little choice but to wear clothes, therefore we wear clothes that we want in the short term. 

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