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| 제목 | Second, I tried to write about my favrite movie and worst movie. | 등록일 | 2023-09-17 |
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| 내용 | My favorite movie is the "Only the brave". This is about firefighters. More exactly speaking, it's about firefithers of forest fire and they are called "hotshot". It begin pretty calm, but the ending is so sad and impressive. Charactoers between relationship and a process of the main character's growth are why I love this movie. In other side, one of my worst movies is the "Joker". I like joker in "The dark knight" movie that Heath Ledger played. But the "Joker" movie is private unpleasant. I guess it's a director's intention but I couldn't understand main character's behavior still now. | ||
| 담당강사 | Lynda | 등록일 | 2023-09-19 |
| 첨삭 내용 | CORRECTION: "Only the Brave" is my favorite film. This is a story about firefighters. More specifically, it is about "hotshot" forest firefighter firefithers. It starts off rather calmly, but the ending is both heartbreaking and stunning. Characters in a relationship and the process of the main character's evolution are why I enjoy this film. On the other hand, "Joker" is one of my least favorite films. I like Heath Ledger's Joker in "The Dark Knight" movie. However, the "Joker" film is personally unpleasant. I suppose it was the purpose of the director, but I still couldn't understand the main character's actions. |
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